English 1213
Paper #1: Human Conversations
INTRO: For your first paper, I want you to focus on the idea
of writing a ‘conversation,’ which means a paper that brings in other voices
than your own. Instead of writing a paper that says “I think this, and I think
that, and I also think this,” I want you to introduce other people’s ideas and
thoughts, and explain why they’re significant before you weigh in with your own
ideas. Good writing is always writing that responds to a conversation and shows
us why things matter. If you find yourself unable to explain the importance of
a topic or idea, you’ve simply left out too much of the conversation. How to
find the conversation? Find who else is talking about it, and let them discuss
it.
PROMPT: Find THREE people in the book who share the same
basic conversation. This could be a conversation about education, having a
family, losing a job, finding happiness, losing hope, falling in love, etc.
They don’t all have to talk about it the same way, or even agree with each
other, but it should be clear from your paper that they’re each talking about
the same basic thing. Introduce each person by briefly describing them and then
quote something significant of what they bring to the conversation. Explain how
each one adds or seems to respond to the other, and what we learn from hearing
these three people share their discussions with the audience.
OUTLINE: Your INTRODUCTION should open “in the middle”
(we’ll discuss that in class) with one of the ‘humans’ in the book, using their
story or picture to introduce the topic. The rest of the paper should be their
discussions and your responses to them (what makes them significant, why
they’re important/interesting, etc.). Your CONCLUSION should explain why this,
to you, is one of the most important conversations we can have as human beings.
What do you, personally, learn from this conversation that others can benefit
from?
INTRODUCING A SOURCE (an example):
On page 213 of Humans of New York, we see an
intense-looking young man staring at the camera with blue eyes and a blue-green
hoodie. It’s clearly winter in the photo, as we see snow in the background and
barren trees. The man is photographed in the act of talking to the
photographer, and tells him that “You have to network and create opportunities,
but I’m not really good at that because I get nervous and overly quiet in
social situations” (Stanton). This
is important because…
REQUIREMENTS:
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Use three people from the book in
your discussion
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Be sure to briefly describe each
person and QUOTE from their stories (you don’t have to quote the entire story,
esp. if it’s long)
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Cite all quotations according to
MLA format (author and/or page number)
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The paper should have a clear
Introduction, Discussion, and Conclusion
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Be sure to include a Works Cited
entry with our book
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Due Thursday, February 9 [We WILL have class on this day, but there won't be any other work due]